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Cycling through the park,
I look around and see,

The world revolving about
me in perfect tranquility.

I hear Lacuna Coil weaving
images in my mind.
Singing of hurt, despair,
Tragedy, and lovers left behind.

As my legs cry out in protest
And beg to be given rest.

I can't help but wonder,
As I listen and I see,
Why the world revolves about
Me in perfect tranquility.
©2007-2009 *aries2203
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You know what the effects of music can be on a mind with nothing to do, but cycle through a dark and misty park. :)
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oooooooooooh
DEEEEEPER!

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:bulletblack:I dream of a day where Chickens can cross the road without their motives being questioned.:bulletblack:
True dat yo, true dat.

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True Bravery isn't fearlessness, but acknowledging and facing your fears.
:rofl: Thanks. Love the talking, innit bruv. :D

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Lacuna Coil :boogie: Cajjie :pills: Emilie Autumn :headbang:

What's a smart blonde?
A Golden Retriever :D

In space deaf people can't hear themselves scream.

SPLEEN!

There is no theory of evolution, only animals that Chuck Norris has allowed to live.
Thanks :hug: I was listening to this beautiful song, cycling through the Avenue at night and there was this light fog. It was sooo beautiful!

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Lacuna Coil :boogie: Cajjie :pills: Emilie Autumn :headbang:

What's a smart blonde?
A Golden Retriever :D

In space deaf people can't hear themselves scream.

SPLEEN!

There is no theory of evolution, only animals that Chuck Norris has allowed to live.
omg thats well goood!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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TIGERS ROCK!!!!!!!!

arent these so cute: :moo: :sheepish: lol

HYPERNESSNESSNESSNESSSNESSSSNE SNENSES*COUGH*NESSENSSENSJFG sorry.

DO NOT GO ON THIS LINK [link] (tell me if you did)
Innit! :D Thanks. :)

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Lacuna Coil :boogie: Cajjie :pills: Emilie Autumn :headbang:

What's a smart blonde?
A Golden Retriever :D

In space deaf people can't hear themselves scream.

SPLEEN!

There is no theory of evolution, only animals that Chuck Norris has allowed to live.
wow that must RAWK :peace:

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:bulletblack:I dream of a day where Chickens can cross the road without their motives being questioned.:bulletblack:
Yep! :thumbsup:

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Lacuna Coil :boogie: Cajjie :pills: Emilie Autumn :headbang:

What's a smart blonde?
A Golden Retriever :D

In space deaf people can't hear themselves scream.

SPLEEN!

There is no theory of evolution, only animals that Chuck Norris has allowed to live.
i do like this one. the word choice was good and i like the flow of the poem. good job! :hug:

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we're all mad here! :headbang:

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